In the show, if participators answer twenty problems that the host mentioned correctly, they will get five hundreds thousand U.S. dollars as a prize.
In conclusion, issue of whether parents are the best teachers is a complex one, requiring subjective judgement, consequently, there are no easy or certain answers.
First of all, children can earn money from their jobs, although there isn’t too much, but they will keep their salary gingerliness.
该作文题目是讲学生是否应该做兼职，因此children的出现就显得很莫名其妙; although和but是不能连用的; 指代不明，they不知道是指代前面的什么;
The second argument-it might have been noticed by others-is that in some occasion, it is quite difficult to compare parents to teachers because parents are a kind of people, teachers are a kind of vocation.
They shocked their friends, devastated their families, crushed their best friends.
The show is so compelling but attractive.
To some extends, I agree with the author’s general assertion that if parents also have a comprehensive sense of professional knowledge.
——To some extends应改为To some extent